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Old 10-27-2009, 01:23 PM
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Lightbulb “Howling in the Night” (My own personal story)

As I began my slow walk, all the cold air approached the city and entered uninvited. Everything around seemed so quiet, no one was on the streets. In the night sky, flying, staring eyes hovered across the darkness. Almost the whole entire city felt as if there was a certain presence and it was surging through with tremendous evil. It seemed to me that being Locke, that there was no expelling humans breathing.


The city began to change into something wicked, unbearable to anything that is living. It is something and that isn’t known. A man was walking through the murky alleys of a city and nothing differed about the city to him. It took some time but he noticed a change. Where did all the people go? They can’t have just disappeared or can they. There are millions of reasons for the desertion of the people. Looking from street to street, Osiris saw nothing but pitch-black darkness. He was nearing the edge of the city when he heard a howling in the night. Brushing off like nothing scared him, there was a large hill resting past the large building and shadows flickered pass it. Apprehension grew inside his heart but he didn’t stop. An array of avaricious looking crows applied themselves to the branches. That usually meant a bad omen was coming soon and most of the time, it was true besides a few cases. He looked up in the night sky and saw a full moon, surrounded by clouds. The trees circling the hill, there were shadows dashing. What in the world could be moving through the trees? Spouting from the forest, came a creature unknown to Osiris’s eyes. It appeared as though it was a wolf but walked on two feet and had much more hair. This is getting different and frightening. It looks familiar from movies that I have seen. Catapulting itself with its two hind legs, it was over Osiris and was dropping to his position. Osiris rolled to his side and dodged the creature. He pushed his legs up and began to run and the beast was very fast. Tripping on the ground, nothing else could be done. Hovering over him was the creature; Osiris was frozen with shock and consternation. With its clawed hands, Osiris was picked up from the ground and brought to be hanging from his feet. Looking into the creature’s eyes, sharp-pointed teeth gripped into Osiris’s skin and ripped blood out. Blood began gushing out. Then it bit into his skin and threw him to the ground. The creature darted into the ominous forest and wasn’t seen again.


Locke was passing through the dark edgy city and reasons came about. What if the people were scared or frighten of something. The city grew much colder and darker with each passing second. His red hair was blowing in the breeze with his black coat and chained accessories. He had a smooth, gentle face but rugged look. The moon was achromatic being void from all color. Everything around Locke passed him and he reached the end of the city. Laying on that hill looks like a man dead but it is a mystery to me why that he is the last person in this city. He stayed at a distance because it was unknown and probably dangerous. Waking up from his unconsciousness, Osiris felt a paining sensation throughout his body. My body aches all over and I thought I was a goner. His physical appearance began to change. All his short hair grew extremely long and expanded in different directions. Fuzzy dark, black hair grew over his arms, legs, and body. Clothes fell off and hair covered his entire body. At the end of his hands, sharp claws came about. Sharp fangs and teeth appeared to be growing in his mouth. That bite must be changing my whole existence and now I must be turning into that very same creature I saw. He stood up and looked all around in new eyes. Locke saw everything that was going on and the changing of that man on the ground. Trying to be silent as possible without disturbing the creature, he walked toward behind a building. Osiris sniffed around and smelt a human being in the area. Hmm, where could this pathetic creature be hiding. My sensitive smell will locate him. Suddenly with such great movement, Osiris found the human being. Locke’s eyes opened extremely wide in terror and didn’t know what to do. Osiris likes playing with his food and so he let Locke run away.


A new presence emerged into the desolated city. Clouds surrounded the full moon and it became dark. The dark covered figure bristled through town at his own leisure. Having black, long and smooth hair, he was perfect in every sense. Where is all the life to be smitten and destroyed? He had a long, black cape and under it was a white tux with a floret on it. Accelerating his speed, Valentine was in search of one thing only and that was blood. His throat was getting quite dry. The wind severely increased its intensity and clouds moved across the sky. A human came rushing by Valentine and he grinned at the human. The human kept running but Valentine came up behind him and gripped the shoulder. With force, Valentine struck the human up against the wall. All the air suddenly rushed out of the human’s body and Valentine was in front. I stared at the human with my inviting, beautifully red eyes and fangs glaring in the bright moonlight. My teeth were ready to proceed but were rudely interrupted. This human looks scared but that makes it even more delicious. He will be a prey. In the corner of his eye, something was approaching him fast. That thing coming looks like a werewolf and this will be very exciting.


I stared death in the face and yet live. These beings need to fight and leave me alone. Whatever was in front of me turned around to face the werewolf. As I can tell, everything is going smoothly to plan. Being the intelligent one, the one that just left began to talk.


“I am Valentine and you should know my name before I kill you, foul beast,” calmly said Valentine.


“I am Osiris and Valentine, don’t expect that much because I will gladly let you attempt that,” loudly said Osiris.
“Werewolves are simply inferior to my race and nothing prevails over it,” said Valentine.



“Just stop talking and lets see who is really superior to one other,” said Osiris.
“Let the fighting commence,” said Valentine.


Being I, Locke, heard everything and knew much more now. Things were clear now. From what I seen and heard, it seems Valentine could be a vampire. Osiris, on the other hand, is a werewolf and which I saw him changing. Valentine took his black cape off and all that could be seen was a white tux. Both of the inhuman creatures began assailing one other. The moonlight showed ever so brighter at this time of night. The vampire’s fangs shined in the moonlight. Leaping high in the air, Osiris came atop of Valentine. I can see that Osiris is the dumb one in this fight. Valentine side step to the side and easily dodged the attack. With his impaling nails, he slid them across Osiris’s throat and tried to kill him. Blood spouted out and Valentine licked his nails. Nearly when thought dead, Osiris pulled himself back to his feet.

“Next time, I will make sure to kill you,” slowly gritted Valentine.

Osiris attacked Valentine with his clawed arms. He just scathed Valentine’s skin but that had no effect because the skin healed instantaneously. Locked saw the battle going in the favor of the vampire. I know who’s going to win and end this dispute. Valentine groaned weary of this useless attacking and appeared right in front of Osiris and ripped the heart out. Then the werewolf dropped dead to the floor. I soon knew that nothing would occupy Valentine and I would be the next target. He sunk his long, razor blade fangs into the bleeding heart and devoured it. Turning toward me, he had an evil exposing grin laid across his face. I began to run but he grasped my arm. Black bruises appeared on my arms and redden marks formed. He pulled me closer and his eyes stoned my form. Fangs appeared and flashed in the moonlight. Pressure grew to my neck and took root into the flesh of my neck. My life was flashing right before my very eyes. He slowly drained the red liquid out and started to satisfy his need. Vision was decreasing and I grew weaker with each passing second. Soon my body was dry of all wetness. Valentine stopped biting my neck and quickly dashed to the tallest building. We were on the top of the building and the night was very sinister. Valentine’s tongue went around his mouth and cleaned the blood off. He threw my almost inanimate body to the side. I looked up as I was falling and Valentine was gone. The people must have sensed the danger and escaped for their lives. All the cold air rushed by my head. There was a hard impact and everything went black. My lifeless body laid dead.
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Old 11-12-2009, 05:35 AM
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I know this may be long but people please read it and tell me what you think.
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Old 11-12-2009, 05:32 PM
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that was so hott....... yummy Valentine!
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Old 11-12-2009, 05:38 PM
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Aww thankies!
Valentine was yummy? How? lol
What was your favorite part of my short story? ^.^
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where valentines coat gets ripped off, and he's wearing his tux hmmmm.... poor osirus though.... and locke, ouch, to both of them! gosh, i wish there was a little romnance in it though =/
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Old 11-13-2009, 04:37 PM
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I bet that you enjoyed where Valentine's tux was ripped off!! ha ha. lol
Yes poor poor Osirus!
Locke had to die to make the story end so well.
It is a short story and I am happy to have written it.
Why do you wish that there was some romance in this story?
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I bet that you enjoyed where Valentine's tux was ripped off!! ha ha. lol
Yes poor poor Osirus!
Locke had to die to make the story end so well.
It is a short story and I am happy to have written it.
Why do you wish that there was some romance in this story?
i'm an extereme romantic, and I grow more bored of the story when there isn't any ^^
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i'm an extereme romantic, and I grow more bored of the story when there isn't any ^^
Not all stories are going to be romantic but I too love romantic!!
And you can just imagine there being love in the story by using imagination. :]-
But my story didn't bore you, did it?
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