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[XxbrokenlovexX]

This is the begining to a story I am writing. Read it and tell me what you think.


Allie Burton threw herself into her chair, aware that people were watching her.
There was only one person she cared about, the rest didn’t matter.
If he wasn’t looking then, this whole day was a waste of time.
She turned her head slightly to the side, to glance at him quickly.
He was staring, much like everyone else, with a confused look on his face.

Oliver Sharp was the cutest guy in the whole school.
Maybe in the whole world, but since Allie hadn’t seen everyone in the world, she couldn’t say.
He had a handsome face, not really square, but not round, either. Something about the way he held his mouth made him look more mature.

His eyes made him stand out from the rest of the boys.
Even those who had the most perfect face couldn’t even begin to compare to this.
His eyes were a deep blue-gray.
Somedays, if he were wearing dark clothing, they looked almost metallic. They gave all his emotions away.
You could tell if he really found your joke funny or if he was faking it, by looking at his eyes.
When he really found someone humorous, they laughed along with his mouth.
Allie loved to watch him laugh, because his eyes would sparkle and shine.
When he was angry they flashed and narrowed, making him look quite vicious.
Because of this, Allie guest that he had a temper.
When he was sad, his eyes seemed to get darker, bleaker.

Allie didn’t like to look at him while he was angry or sad.
She always found that seeing him sad made her sad, and the same when he was angry.

It was days like today, that she wished she could disappear.
Today, everyone in the school had found out her secret, that she cut her wrists and that she had almost committed suicide last year.
The secret had been let out last week, and everyone had known about it then, but this was the day the popular girls had picked to make a big deal out of it, and of course everyone else would follow them.

Everyone in the high school was whispering about her and laughing at her as she walked by them in the halls.
Even Allie’s best friend had betrayed her and laughed behind her back.
She was sick of the drama and sick of being humiliated again and again.

Allie silently prayed that Oliver had not heard the stupid rumors.
She really liked him, and a week ago she had thought he liked her back.
Then the stupid rumors started going around.
He hadn’t looked at her once before this.

She turned her head halfway, to glance at him, from the corner of her eye.
He was still staring at her, but it wasn’t confusion on his face.
Allie’s stomach rolled as she recognized the emotion on his face as pity.

For a second she thought she would be sick.
Pity was worse than anything else.
She could deal with him being disgusted with her or thinking she was a freak, but she couldn’t handle him pitying her.
She got enough pity as it was.

Allie raised her hand and asked to be excused.
“Are you not feeling well?” Mrs. Serata asked.
She looked concerned and that bothered Allie, even though she knew that the only reason Mrs. Serata was concerned was about her health.

She had to work on clearing the lump from her throat for a second, before answering in a low voice.
“No, I’m not feeling well. I need to see the nurse, please.”
Mrs. Serata nodded and started to write a pass.

“Will someone please escort miss Burton to the nurse?” She asked.
Since she didn’t look up, she didn’t see the look of horror on Allie’s face.
She didn’t have to look around to know that she would end up going alone.

Allie squeezed her eyes shut for half a second, praying for some miracle happen and for Oliver to come with her.

“I’ll do it.” Oliver called, rising from his seat.
Allie’s eyes snapped open in surprise.
Oliver walked right past her without even glancing at her.
He walked to the front of the room, took the pass and walked out, without another word.
Allie hurried to catch up.

“What are you doing?” She asked breathlessly.
He smirked down at her, his eyes lightening up.
“I’m taking you to the nurse.” He said innocently.
Her eyes narrowed and she search his eyes for any contraction to his tone.
There wasn’t one.

“What I meant was, why are you?” Allie asked, watching her feet as she walked.
Since she was looking at the ground she saw his feet stop moving.
“I don’t know what you mean.” He said, the corners of his lips pulling down.
Allie looked at him for another second, before turning my head forward.

“Didn’t you here the rumor?” Allie whispered.
He laughed, surprising her again.
When she looked at him he was smiling a polite smile.
His lips twitched as if he were holding back laughter.

“What’s so funny? Did you hear it or not?” She demanded.
Her voice shook slightly.
His lips twitched again, and his eyes were filled with humor.
“As a matter of fact I did hear it.” He said.
His voice was a mocking as his eyes.
Allie waited for a second, expecting him to go on.

He didn’t.
He started walking again, not waiting for her before he entered the nurses office.
Allie ran after him, pushing through the door just as the nurse opened her mouth.

“Can I help one of you?” She asked in a polite voice, looking between the two of them.
“Um, yeah...I need some Tylenol please.” Allie said quietly.
She smiled and turned to grab a bottle.
She handed Allie two pills and a cup.

Allie watched Oliver out of the corner of her eye.
He was pretending to examine the chair he was sitting on, but she caught him glancing at her a couple of times.
After she had taken the medicine they walked silently out of the office.

[PaigeIsUnwritten<3]

WOW MADDIE..
I honestly had NO idea how much talent you have at writing books!
Holy crap.
I don't want to stop reading!
FREAKIN A!
WRITE SOME MORE!!!
Then tell me of course. ;]
Awesome.

[XxbrokenlovexX]

Thanks!
*blush*
I have a lot more of it written,
But I'm still writing it.
When I get this chapter finished I will post more.

[MyBrutalRomance]

Maddy!
Keep writing!!!! MORE MORE MORE!
LOVE IT!!

[XxbrokenlovexX]

Thanks Blaire!
I'm putting more on later today or tomorrow.

[PaigeIsUnwritten<3]

You should like make a book Maddy.
Lol. Your really good at writing.
I cannot wait to read more!!

[XxbrokenlovexX]

lol
Thanks Paige!
I am making a book! xD
I doubt it will be any good...
But then again,
I doubt all my work. xD