08-28-2008, 10:25 PM
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Red.
I feel the urge to cry red tonight,
to stain the skin, so pure and white. Tears are nothing 'til they turn red, and stain the sheets lying on my bed. As anyone who has read my stuff before will know, I usually don't write short poems, but this one sounded perfect just like this so I didn't add anything...hope you liked it! XDD
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I will Razzle effing Dazzle yer @$$!!!
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09-04-2008, 09:48 PM
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a very depressed card, but thanks
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I will Razzle effing Dazzle yer @$$!!!
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09-04-2008, 09:58 PM
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o i really lyked how deep it was.
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Love is like a rose, you see-it always dies theres 1 way to fix that. only one that you'll have to figure out yourself. I'll be waiting right here for you. if you think that you have it then pm. by the way it's a game. 1 hint, and only 1 hint- the object is never alive. not once nor will it ever be.
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09-05-2008, 01:04 AM
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i like your poems.
they r all so good. and i liked your short one its simple and said fast but yet so many words to think about i like short poems better 1. cuz its less to read (^^) 2. cuz they explain so much in so little. and its amazing.
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BLaH!?! 
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09-13-2008, 05:02 PM
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awwwhh how lovely ^.^
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they call kids like us vicious and carved out of stone but for what we've become we just feel more alone Turn corners slowly Ride roads with pride Keep ahead of dreams but dont leave them behind God will forgive them and let them into heaven...i cant live with that for you i will stay another day <3 
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10-09-2008, 07:24 PM
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hu..i feel like this evrynight now...i dont know wht happened ad i dont know wht will...
but those red tears seep back into me bed...
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If he loved me;
I would be safe. If he loved me; The razor would go away. I love him; He can't see. What do I do; When you get lifted off your own feet?!?!?!?!? </3Breanna Nicole
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10-09-2008, 07:49 PM
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Awhh that Was cute ,, Yeahh Depressing Card >< I Can't imagine getting a card with that in it ... lol . Its Veryy good though
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ItWasJustAKissButICouldSeeYouMeantIt
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10-09-2008, 07:53 PM
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thats awesome :]
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Never have
been one to write it down now i think i can I know I'm stronger now  Who's looking south? Not me, I'm not looking back I'm done denying the truth to anyone 'Cause I'm alive
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