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10-26-2009, 04:20 AM
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Trust Is A Big Word (lyrics)
to be totally honest, i really don't know if i should post this here at this particular time...but...i'll try?
ok so me and my friend did a lyrical improv that we wrote down and this is our first time so we're not expecting everyone to like it. i'm not sure if it's amazing but we were kinda stoked that we wrote it in the first place. it doesn't have a tune but . it's a song in the making (eventually) Broken hearts, broken souls, broken lies. All you can tell me is always a surprise. You promised me this, then went back on your word I trusted you in such a wonderful bliss You promised me love, but all I got was shit Now I think 'How did I end up like this?' Trust is a big word, I realize that now. But "now" is too late, I guess. Hate is an easy word to get along with. And Love is tough to get along without. I can see the secrets behind your smile You can't fool me, no way can you fool me I can see the passion behind your lies All I can think is why, why are you so screwed up? Trust is a big word, I realize that now. But "now" is too late, I guess. Hate is an easy word to get along with. And Love is tough to get along without. So why do you feel the need to lie? All I wanted was a little happiness, maybe. Maybe. So why do I always cry when I think of you? Maybe. Is it because I said 'I love you'? Trust is a big word, I realize that now. But "now" is too late, I guess. Hate is an easy word to get along with. And Love is tough to get along without. hope it's good =] it's called trust is a big word because we spent all of our creativity on the song and couldn't think of a snappier title. hope it isn't too bad and please post comments for this. try helpful critisism thanks...!
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10-26-2009, 04:37 AM
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it's awesome! i was just recently talking to a friend about a friend and what she said is that you can trust your friends, to a certain extent (i am a gossip whore, so i tell my friends not to tell me secrets) (one of my friends doesn't beleive in dating, just "having fun in bed" so you can't trust ur bf's being around her) (another is just... unreliable...) you see what i mean (those were examples of the trust to an extent) i don't totally trust my friends w/my deepest darkest secrets, although it wouldn't be a secret if i told them =P oh yeah and also again, I REALLY LIKE IT! ^^
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Last edited by kalci; 10-26-2009 at 04:50 AM.
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10-26-2009, 04:42 AM
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aww thank you ^^
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10-26-2009, 04:52 AM
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^^.......................................
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10-26-2009, 05:34 PM
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It's really really good..
I love it! 
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10-27-2009, 01:01 AM
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i'm pretty glad that people are liking this cuz this is like an ameteur run for me and my friend
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10-27-2009, 02:08 AM
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aww. thats so awesome!
 i love it how could anyone think that its bad?
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10-28-2009, 01:41 AM
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this is e"citing.
i didn't think it would go this awesomely well ^^
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10-30-2009, 03:34 PM
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Wow. And, this is your first time?
I realllly like it. =) Its very good.
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10-31-2009, 04:39 AM
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well not my first time as much as my friend's
and we both did that together for our first time so yeah. kinda the first.
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