10-30-2009, 05:41 PM
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Desired Blood
I wrote this last year around September. Tell me what you think and be honest about your opinion.
Dreaming, Wanting, Helplessly to be taken Always time stopping Starving for desire Blood consuming all Needing liquid, Filling my hunger Being satisfied Sensuously touch Feeling so great Strenuously passionate Emanating mercy Immaculate parting Limiting deference The bareness, nakedness, loneliness, Striking the neck Dripping down Covering all Tasting so refreshing The guilt, Uncontrolling pleasure Everything perfect Trembling beneath you Hypnotizing your form Degrading the existence Exciting your need The want immeasurable Fulfilling all desire Immortality will come Living in your presence Expelling love Exotic it may be Riveting closer Beyond any chain Adamant attaching Rivalry toward me Addiction never leaving Knowledge marking Claim whats yours Ripping at all Superior you are Now have it Whenever the desire No end to come The beginning here Always repleting 
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10-30-2009, 07:59 PM
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Mmmmmmmm considering that i am a vampire i absolulty love your poem and think it is quite making me want to feed soooo bad!
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xxxsunshine_seductionxxx This is what it means to be dead. Perfect silence. Cold and hot at the same time. Lost, alone, nowhere. *This is for you my love......I need you*
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10-30-2009, 08:43 PM
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dat was tight and im a vampire 2 now im thirsty too gonna go feed
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11-02-2009, 04:41 PM
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I am a vampire too!!! ^..^ I was in a feeding frenzy when I made the poem and now I want to feed!! :]- hehe
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11-02-2009, 06:15 PM
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Hiiiiiis
ohhhhhhhhh me tooo love maybe we could all have a huge feeding orgy or something more private lol! You write the most orgasmic poems i hae ever read!MMMMMMMM bite me please!
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xxxsunshine_seductionxxx This is what it means to be dead. Perfect silence. Cold and hot at the same time. Lost, alone, nowhere. *This is for you my love......I need you*
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11-03-2009, 01:26 PM
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 hehe. lolAww thankies, I am glad that I write the most orgasmic poems that you have ever read!!! Otays, I will bite youuu!!! -slowly walkks over to you and smiles while licking my lips, drawing my fangs out, I inch you neck out, and put forth my fangs into your skin. Blood drips down your body and I turn you into an even stronger vampire- How was that? I bit you!!! ^.^
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11-06-2009, 03:51 AM
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that was rilly great... and yes, i too am a vamp.. i wanna get in on this feeding party!!! BITE ME TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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NO1 KNOWS HOW DIFFRENT SOMEBODY CAN BE UNTIL THEY ARE IN THE SHOES OF SOMEONE TRUELY BIZARRE ........BARLEY HUMAN EVEN 
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11-06-2009, 03:53 AM
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hey u guyz should join my coven ... go on my page it's under my groups...it's rily fun in there
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NO1 KNOWS HOW DIFFRENT SOMEBODY CAN BE UNTIL THEY ARE IN THE SHOES OF SOMEONE TRUELY BIZARRE ........BARLEY HUMAN EVEN
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11-06-2009, 05:35 PM
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Nope, only a select few can be biten and can join the party. lol But I have other poems, check them out and tell me what you think.
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11-06-2009, 06:21 PM
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Hiiiiiiiiiiis you should right more!
Ich leibe dich.......Dustin! <3 <3 <3
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xxxsunshine_seductionxxx This is what it means to be dead. Perfect silence. Cold and hot at the same time. Lost, alone, nowhere. *This is for you my love......I need you*
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