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Old 11-03-2009, 06:53 AM
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CUTTER'S LULLABY

Go to sleep, and close your eyes.
And dream of broken butterflys,
that tore their wings against a thorn.
You know the pain that they have borne.
Silver metal, shine so bright. Scarlet blood, that feels so right.
Dream of that blood trickling down.
And wake up just before you drown.
The moonlight's shining off your tears,
as you bleed out your own worst fears.
So tonight when you start to cry,
whisper the cutters lullaby:
Hushabye baby, your almost dead.
You dont have a pulse and your pillow is red.
Your family hates you, your friends let you bleed.
Sleep tight with a knife, its all that you need.
Rockabye baby, broken and scarred.
You didnt know that life would be this hard.
Time to end the pain that you hide so well.
And down will come baby, straight back to hell.

DARK SECRETS YOU HOLD

Come here, love, and let yourself bleed.
Your dark blood is bright and you do what you please.
So drink your tears and hide your pain.
Fake a sweet smile, you know its insane.
Dont kill yourself, or ruin this game.
You want to continue, strengthen the flame.
It hurts your friends just to watch you burn.
Your trust, it takes years just to earn.
We all love you,
yet you hate yourself.
I have my thoughts for you, but i keep them to myself.
Dark secrets you hold, but we think we know you well.
Lets just hope we dont meet up in hell.
This friendship is daring, but worth all the while.
Just the sound of your name makes me smile.
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Old 11-04-2009, 03:54 PM
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omg! it's an awesome poem!!!!!!! i love it (the first one) it's so depressing, and true at the same time! lol
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Old 11-04-2009, 03:56 PM
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reading this makes me...umm idk.
but its really really good
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Old 11-04-2009, 04:59 PM
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i like the second poem its soo awsome its pretty much describing my life in peom form
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Old 11-08-2009, 01:34 AM
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wow.
thats really good.
i could never write like that even if i tried.
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