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11-04-2009, 04:09 PM
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Breaking Twilight
I wrote this poem earilar this year around March. What does everyone think of it? Tell me your honest opinion.
What does it mean to you? The light enticing Developing into the new Something being unnatural Landing into the world Nowhere to go Needing the want Measuring to few Higher than most Nothing stopping Betraying to none The pleasure overcoming Onslaught to anything Irresistible to touch Can’t keep away Releasing my curse Presences so close Manifesting into passion Nothing need be said Overpowering all desire Producing entirely new Feeling so alive Everything begun No hope stopping Lasting a lifetime Combination of two Brings something new Half of the moon Liquid refilling the fetish Refreshing the thirst Irreparable of none The breath leaving Plaintive to thyself Becoming the requite 
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11-05-2009, 05:54 AM
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i'm sorry dustin, but i don't understand your poem at all....... don't get me wrong, i've liked all you're other poems though!
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11-05-2009, 01:21 PM
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Just think about the poem and re-read the poem. Then tell me what you think that it means. But if you don't understand still, I will explain it to you.
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11-05-2009, 03:02 PM
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uhmmmmm i'm thinking omething like a ampire falling for a human? lol i hope i'm not too far off lmao
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11-05-2009, 04:22 PM
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Eventually the vampire finds somebody either vampire or human, it doesn't matter but at the full moon, the vampire bites the other person and the last breath leaves their body. 
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11-05-2009, 04:55 PM
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oh!!! i was close!!! yay me lol.... but now that i get it, i quite like it!
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be careful of the words you say,keep them short and sweet, because you never know from day to day, what words you'll have to eat
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11-05-2009, 05:07 PM
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Yeppers, you were close but not there though.
Yay you!! lol I know, my poem was awesome and I am glad that you like it. :]
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11-05-2009, 05:32 PM
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lol, yeah, you make really good poems! lol
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be careful of the words you say,keep them short and sweet, because you never know from day to day, what words you'll have to eat
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11-06-2009, 01:25 PM
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I always make good poems, my poetry is about of alot of things in life.
I am going to post a new poem up soon!
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11-13-2009, 02:14 AM
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hmmm..... confused but brilliant if it makes sense to you
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Stupid is as stupid does  sounds like you..... 
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