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Old 11-05-2009, 01:57 PM
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Default A poem I wrote to an Ex-Bestfriend.

How does it feel to walk alone?
It was me you left standing in the dark.
Here is to all the times you took everything away from me and threw it on the ground. Heres to all the times you judged me instead of being my friend. Here is to all the opportunities you made me leave behind. Here is to all the friendships I laid down for you. Here is to all the restless nights of lies you have put on my shoulders. Here is to all the times you have caused me pain. Here is to all the insecurities you have given me. Here is too all the scars you have left behind. Here is to all the times I trusted you, even when I knew I shouldn’t have. And here is to all the times that I no longer stand alone.

How does it feel to be the one to stand in the dark?

I can't really write poems, but I thought I'd post it.
Tell me what you think<3
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I loved you,
You made me, hate me,
You gave me, hate see,
It saved me, and these tears are deadly,
You feel that, I rip that
Everytime you tried to steal that
You feel bad? You feel sad?
I'm sorry, hell no, fuck that
It was my heart, it was my life,
it was my start,
It was your knife,
This strife it dies,
This life and these lies,
And these lungs have sung,
This song for too long,
And it's true, I hurt too,
Remember, I loved you..
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Old 11-05-2009, 02:27 PM
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Wow rachele. You suck. No I'm kidding! I like it. Is it to ashton?
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Old 11-05-2009, 02:29 PM
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Yes it is.
Do you really like it?
Nicole told me it was deep :|
hehe.
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I loved you,
You made me, hate me,
You gave me, hate see,
It saved me, and these tears are deadly,
You feel that, I rip that
Everytime you tried to steal that
You feel bad? You feel sad?
I'm sorry, hell no, fuck that
It was my heart, it was my life,
it was my start,
It was your knife,
This strife it dies,
This life and these lies,
And these lungs have sung,
This song for too long,
And it's true, I hurt too,
Remember, I loved you..
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Old 11-05-2009, 02:48 PM
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Ashton? Or.. someone else ? :O
i like it, its deep.
AND, pm me who this poem is about I have an idea.
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