How I Feel. Poem.

[PaigeIsUnwritten<3]

I am not a poem writer.
but... EH.. i posted it on my myspace too...


"I'm not sure if you know or not But I really do love you a lot. You still hold a special place in my heart And you did, right from the start. You don't know how I'm feeling. I have yet to vocalize Desire deep inside me. Can you see it in my eyes? I tremble when I'm near you Heat travels up my thighs and I want you with an urgency That I just can't describe. Dare I reach out to touch you? Do you think you'd realize How much I want and need you? Can you see it in my eyes? I long to say, "I love you," But am scared of your reply. Terrified like a child I've become paralyzed. The camouflaged emotions Lead to pain and silent cries. And yet I just can't tell you. Don't you see it in my eyes? Confessing through this poem My dilemma summarized. The feeling's quite cathartic, But will lead to my demise. But when she came along and took your breath away, I was devastated and didn't know what to say. I spend my nights crying, time after time, I spent my days lying, saying I was fine. Little did you know, my heart was crushed inside, And on that day, a little of me died. But with her, you look so in love 'Cause you are an angel from above. I now have to teach myself to move on, Though I know I won't But about one thing I am unsure: Why it can't be me, and not her. "




tell me what you think!

[izzylawl]

oOo.. I like it alot.
10/10

its rhyme-ish and reminds me of my own writings in a way..
very well done =]

[PaigeIsUnwritten<3]

YAY, someone likes it! Thank you!! =]

[cutthroat]

That was so fucking amazing!!!
It doesn't surprise me though that
something you wrote would be
that good!!!

[PaigeIsUnwritten<3]

Aw.
Ty Adam! =D

[cutthroat]

Any time your amazing!