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11-06-2009, 02:47 AM
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fucked up daddys girl
I can feel my throat close tight
unable to swallow the lump my eyes burn and sag my vein snap shut my breath slows its pace my heart beat comes to a halt I can feel it coming But I can see nothing I know time is running out the dials on the clock cant seem to keep up anymore I know its near the shadows began to cover my eyes I am blacking out of here I can feel it coming But I can see nothing The clock has hit 12 just its visiting hours the previous wounds rip open last nights memory still scarred on me I lay in the dark I feel the ground tremble with footstep I can feel it coming now I am starting to see something a crack of light fills my room my door creeps open the worst sound to my ears it slithers near me touching and caressing my skin the monster has come to hurt me again my stomach turns, I want to hurl as it whispers "hello daddy's little girl"
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I'll pretend That I'm kissing the lips I am missing And hope that my dreams will come true. And then while I'm away, I'll write home ev'ry day, And I'll send all my loving to you.  I am in love with you Matty.
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11-06-2009, 03:26 AM
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well uhm ew? i like the poem, and it made me sick to my stomach.... things like that are so gross.....
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11-06-2009, 12:54 PM
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....sorry if I made you sick....
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I'll pretend That I'm kissing the lips I am missing And hope that my dreams will come true. And then while I'm away, I'll write home ev'ry day, And I'll send all my loving to you. I am in love with you Matty.
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11-06-2009, 02:14 PM
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lol a nonpuking sick that.... idk..... it's just that what people do to their own kids makes me sick.......lol
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be careful of the words you say,keep them short and sweet, because you never know from day to day, what words you'll have to eat
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11-06-2009, 04:23 PM
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good poem...story sucks (things that happened to you)
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11-06-2009, 08:08 PM
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wow...thts deep and if its a personal experience im sure it is difficult to write about...i do like this poem very real...
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11-07-2009, 04:29 PM
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This is good
 It has a lot of feeling.
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11-07-2009, 04:43 PM
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wow. i can so relate to that. if that happened to you im so so sorry.
its the worst thing to go through. especially as a little girl. its so deep i swear i re-lived it. incredible. keep writing.
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i love him more than anything else and he doesnt realize how much it kills me to know he loved them so much more than me... i dont think he ever will... my heart is so completely shattered beyond repair. i still love you though, adam. i always will too. ill be here for you til the end even if it kills me.
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11-12-2009, 04:40 AM
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that's what happened to my girlfriend, except, she commited suicide, youre still alive
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